Dear modertor
Dear Moderator,
I have made a music magazine for my coursework. I hope you enjoy looking through my work.
My planning and research starts from the 8th of September,
and my evaluation starts from the 24th of February. I hope you like my finished product, I will post a photo of my product below.
Amy!
I enjoy this Amy, I like the images and how you've spaced them out. I would say to use more of the space so it looks more interesting and I would make the article names more noticeable. But overall good.
ReplyDeleteI like how you have used a photo of the college for the background and how you have included an image to your stories. I think that you could maybe include more stories.
ReplyDeleteThe magazine, pictures and stories is relevant to the purpose. The pictures used on the front cover are well taken and appropriate, and the stories are also to do with the college. The Magazine has a colour scheme which run through the cover and contents page. There is a clear masthead on both pages. You could add pictures on the contents page to make it more appealing.
ReplyDeleteI like how your picture isn't central, it makes your cover look more unique. To improve, you could put more information on the front of the magazine about what's inside. But overall I think you have done a fab job.
ReplyDeleteI like all of the images you chose to use on your front cover and how they are all fit for purpose.As are the stories you chose to use. The fact that your main image is to the side is very individual and interesting.
ReplyDeleteAn improvement could be to add some more stories onto the cover.
i really like your cover its very detailed and all the text and images are clear to see. you've kept a consistent colour scheme throughout which is very important. only improvement is to add the price
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