Evaluation Question 1: Use, Develop, Challenge Double Page Spread.

1. In the Kerrang magazine, they use a banner at the top, above the masthead, I liked the idea of this, so decided to use it in my magazine, I think it makes it look more professional, and gives me a chance to add more text to my front cover.

2. My slugline is inspired by the one off the Kerrang magazine. I like how it goes over the masthead, it makes it look like a stamp. This is why I have decided to do it to my magazine too.

3.I have brought my main person in the picture to the front, so that the masthead is behind him. Kerrang have also done this.

4. The main picture on the Kerrang magazine, is of 3 men. I decided to use this when it come to my main picture too. I have made my models stand the same as the picture on Kerrang's magazine.

5. I have used white text in the middle of the page to break the picture up, this is what I copied from Kerrang, because I think its effective, as it stands out to the audience.

6. To make my magazine look realistic, I had to put a barcode at the bottom, I copied the placing of where to put it from the Kerrang magazine, and used a box at the bottom for the price and date.

7. I used the paintbrush to make a splodge on the page, Kerrang also did this. I made the colour red to go with the rest of my magazine, but because its red it also resembles blood, which makes the magazine look more 'rock and roll'.

8. When I got feedback off the examiner, they said that I could do with adding more text to my front cover, by making a lift of different bands that include in the band, it adds more text to my page and it also is for the audience, because it will target the audience, and make them want to read about there favourite bands. Kerrand have done this also, but in a different part of the page.